A song I wrote on guitar...

[DrRay11]

Tell me what you think... The song's called "Black and White," and I know it won't be some of you people's thing, so to speak.

Black and White (full song)

Here are the lyrics:

Black and White

The rays shine down on all of us
But the sky is still not keen
Despite the sun, I’ve never felt so cold—bottomed out
The way is still yet to be seen

I know I’ll down the wine of eternal sacrifice
Plain that no one’s here to take you to paradise
Living all our lives to live with all souls alive
So do not keep us here, where all is black and white

Today, lines down, pieces of dust
Scattered across all my being
Despise the one, I’ve never felt so cold—bottomed out
And gray things are not what they seem

I know I’ll down the wine of eternal sacrifice
Plain that no one’s here to take you to paradise
Living all our lives to live with all souls alive
So do not keep us here, where all is black and white

I know I’ll down the wine of eternal sacrifice
Plain that no one’s here to take you to paradise
Living all our lives to live with all souls alive
So do not keep us here, where all is black and white

[Black Dynamite]

you need a bridge. Otherwise i like it. A little bit of acoustic reverb effect would be nice too.

[DrRay11]

I .. uhh.. had a bridge, did you listen to it all? Thanks for the feedback though.

[Cross]

Dont know alot about guitar but I say its pretty good.

I like the part where it just changes, aabout 5/6 of the way through the song.

Nice

[Black Dynamite]

I .. uhh.. had a bridge, did you listen to it all? Thanks for the feedback though.

i listened to the first minute approximately.. I'll check it out again though all the way through.

[DrRay11]

I updated it, it's full song now. Happy listening (maybe, I hope)...